Multiverse Conquest: Rise of the Saiyan Empire

Contemplating the ruins of his once prosper Empire. Marek Vega, the New Emperor, with his new found... Read more Contemplating the ruins of his once prosper Empire. Marek Vega, the New Emperor, with his new found Legendary Super Saiyan power, takes on the Project of a lifetime!Conquering everything under the Heavens!Naruto World! DXD World! Dragon Ball Z World!!! And finally The Strongest Primordial Realm (OG)!Everything is a land to be taken over in his eyes!Watch as he becomes the greatest Emperor to ever lived!!!There will be a Harem, but it won’t be too much…The MC will be OP in the first arcs but as the story continues this will change. Collapse Kingdom Building, Dragons, Fanfiction, Naruto, Dragon Ball, High School DxD, Male Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Fast Cultivation, Strong to Stronger, Beautiful Female Lead, World Travel Le idee alla base sono molto buone.Poteva essere scritto meglio? Si!Ma rimane il fatto che la storia è molto buona e si vede che più va avanti e più migliora come un principiante che sta acquisendo esperienza...penso che con il tempo diventerà uno dei migliori se non il migliore Holy f#ck what is this trash?! Not gonna lie, the first chapter was hype and got me hooked up, but a couple chapters later the idiotic mc starts jumping worlds, threatening and insulting people left and right with the excuse of "i'm this braindead, disrespectful and childish because muh saiyan pride"There's also the classic "you're just a mere woman, kneel ant!" incel authors love using so much, a waste of time. Hello, my first review, sorry if thatI have read 83 chapters.Short:The concept is cool - a flat plan the size of the universe, where the size of empires is the size of the Milky Way galaxy or more. And our MC wants to build an empire through conquest and he has 2 cheats.1st - allows you to improve genes (do not ask further, the author seems to have not figured out how it works)2nd - can travel around the worlds of short stories / anime / etc., the problem here is that it is not clear how it works, the author did not explain, you need to figure it out yourself in the course of the novel.And that's what you think, damn it! Yes, it's so cool, but the execution is disgusting. And I am silent about relations with the harem, as if I ate a spoonful of shit from Chinese novels.Expanded:SpoilerConcept explained above.MС: The author explains him as a man with a strong will, a genius with charisma, who is ready to conquer the continents, cut down cities to the last child, but this person behaves with his empresses like a pussy that has not seen boobs. The author explained this by saying that the MC had never had sex in his 30 years of life, but read a lot of hentai. Well, I can accept it, but it shouldn't drag on for half the novel, because to read how the MC (who is ready to kill both women and children) blushes and forgets to say the words at the sight of HIS EMPRESSES and cannot take the first step. It's like reading a Chinese novel, constantly cringing at the dialogue between the MC and the haremHarem: As I said above, the harem MC acts like a pussy, which is weird, he spends 10 years of his life in a cell with Yoruichi, but still hasn't slept with her and turns red like a pussy at the sight of her. This is fine? 10 years of f#cking next to a woman who does not hide her exhibitionism (after turning from a cat) and you still haven't slept or kissed? This is not the development of a harem, this is some kind of f#cked up. Add to this that the Author does not develop the characters of the harem at all. It just says that's the fandom here is the FMС now she's the emperor. If you want to know about the character go read the original animePeacebuilding: I'm on chapter 83 and don't know anything about his empire. I know that the continent is very large, and there is another empire that needs to be slaughtered for betrayal, that's all.But this can be explained by the fact that MC has been running around other worlds all this time and gathering reliable people for his empire.But there's also a damn problem, the MC is running around a bunch of different anime, taking characters from there or talking about the plot of the world as if I should know every fandom that the author has chosen. I want explanations, I want to understand what the characters are talking about and I have to google and google and it's f#cking annoying. He wanted to build himself a floating city and goes to Water 7 (One Piece) to the Iceberg for design, AND NOTHING EXPLAINS WHY HE FUCKING COME HERE. I understood as a lover of One Piece, but those who do not rummage should will google.MC Powers: MC is kinda f#cking OP but kind of not, the power system isn't explained adequately and you just don't understand who's going to kill who in one hit. But this is not the main disadvantage for me. MC first has the power to resurrect people, but does not resurrect his dead citizens of the empire (I don’t know why), although he resurrects a bunch of people (20 or 200 thousand, I don’t remember) in the massacre of Lelouch’s world in order to calm Lelouch’s sister. Seriously the author, the power to resurrect people like it's going to the store for candy, it f#cking breaks all the tension of the subsequent story. After all, no one dies, the MC can resurrect everyone. There are still a bunch of some kind of OP forces, but this is garbage, there are eyes that can make everyone you see loyal, damn it’s not logical you say? I agree, but for the MC it's easy, like farting into the water, turned on the power of the eyes and the person is loyal. And after that, all tension, struggle and intrigue broke down. After all, at the beginning of history you can subjugate everyone with the power of your eyes, why the hell do you need to conquer something?The construction of the subordinate forces of the MC:The MC recruits 50,000 kids and brings them into a killer training pod for 10 years. Trainers are Garp(One Piece), Yoruichi(Naruto), Zoldyck Family(Hunter).Chapter 10 is devoted to this, showing how the training goes, how the MC interacts with children. How kids learn to kill/hide/etc. In the end, a tournament for the best killers takes place, out of 50 thousand children, about 5-10 people remain, who are the best in their field, the strongest, and so on.The MC turns this elite into Saiyans, apparently as a reward for the best of the best.Why did I write all this, in general, this whole thing looks logical, except for one fact - the MC at the beginning went to the world of DxD and took Matsuda and Motohama as generals and turned them into Saiyans. Yes, yes - you were not mistaken about these secondary characters, without strength, without will, without anything. JUST BECAUSE THEY LOVE BOOBS.You can say - topic stater, you are biased, maybe the author loves these characters and wants them to be useful and play an important role in his fanfiction. I thought so too, but no. The MC just made them Saiyans and said he would pick them up after graduation. GRADUATION, CARL. This twist kills all the work of the children of the assassins, who for 10 years learned to kill, trained non-stop and all in order to have a meager chance of becoming a Saiyan when their emperor gave this power to some minor bastards. It's a good one... One of the best fan fiction novel At first maybe kinda bad but once MASTERPIECE always MASTERPIECE I disagree. While it was well thought out, the execution was simply bad. I mean, a bit of breathing space and world development would have made it be plausible but its just too rushed. After reading some of the best and worst fanfic crossovers out there, this is simply average, that too only because the author had some great ideas. 2.5/5. Maybe 3ish. You maybe just read less than 30 chapter but it start good in 100+ chapter You are just desperately starved for literacy. Ive seen 3rd world immigrants that think hotdogs are a top cuisine. Im seeing similarities~ Yeah maybe he who think hotdog is the best food in the world is literally the most starved men in the world, you know sometimes 'the best' it's not the best we just call it 'the best' because it's unique and nothing can replace it No, rather they just didnt know any better than a hotdog + a high sense of novelty. Im sure if starved theyd just eat more.No, what you call "best" we either call those unique, deformed, abberant or abnormal. not best, if you think rare deformities defines "best" then. w t f. Have a read before judging. It's good I enjoyed it but it was starting to include manga/anime I've never even heard of which ruined it for me It goes too fast. Can not follow the story. Maybe that's just me but it's like oh he being destroyed then become god Harem is just a no no, especially for a multiversal story..... Read this man this truly a gold now you are just being inappropriate.